Hujan: alam dan manusia

In response to Sebelum & Selepas Hujan.

Awan lalu hujan tumpah
wajah mendung dipalit rahsia
hujan lalu langit pun cerah
hati bengkak mengendong derita

Hujan tumpah mengalir ke sungai

rahsia pecah di dalam dada

titik bersatu menjadi lengai

hati berdarah menjadi bisa

note: 

1) Instead of two consecutive lines of pembayang and maksud, this poem uses alternating arrangement.

2) Instead of the pembayang revealing a similar line of thought with the maksud, it accentuate the differences between the two. This poem tries to highlight the contrast between the 'hujan' experienced by 'alam' and 'manusia'.